Monday, June 1, 2009

Meat-eater

To be simplistic
I am semi-sadistic.
If you're not good at linguistics
You'll be reduced to a statistic.
The floor is your new niche,
So get on your knees, bitch.
Follow my bids
And swig the cure for your throat's itch.

You're like a carnivore with no teeth,
A fucking whore underneath
All of that shit you feed.
Guile! Guile! Guile!
I'll rip that smutty smile off
And lay it next to your teeth.
You're a fucking whore underneath
All of that shit you eat.

Tear off that bill, that fucking filth
With something darker than the night
In which you wander
With perfect aim to claim a stranger.
You purposely put your life in danger,
And pray the shadows are really beggars
Ready to become exchangers.
Here's a nickel for your time.
Here's one more for your behind.
You're a dime, a dime a dozen,
So far from your Hepburn prime.
They'll make you theirs, I'll make you mine.
JUST GET IN LINE! JUST GET IN LINE!

- afm

ps. THIS one is for you :)






16 comments:

hayley said...
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Alex McCurdy said...

oh my, could it be the first typo ever?! good, eye.

ps. no, not you.

hayley said...
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Alex McCurdy said...

a misspelled/misused word is not a typo? hmmm.

ps. don't get me wrong, you're still a whore. you're merely not significant enough to write about :)

hayley said...
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hayley said...
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Alex McCurdy said...

a grammatical error and a typo are blah blah blah blah blah at 87AM! hence, the fence and the present tense of a mind long past absent. nom nom nom i want taquitos.

hayley said...
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WritersChoices said...

god this is sloppy

To be quite simplistic
Im semi-sadistic.
If youre not a linguist
You're just a statistic.
The floor is your new niche,
So get on your knees, bitch.
I said follow my bids
Now swig for your throat's itch,
And drink up my cure, witch.

See how much better that flows now!!
Now make it better!

Alex McCurdy said...

no. it is a song, not a rap.

WritersChoices said...

no its letters
i dont hear any fucking music

Alex McCurdy said...

i do.

WritersChoices said...

look...just because im in your mouth doesnt mean im in your head...

Alex McCurdy said...

just cuz im in your ass doesnt mean im in your mouth... oh wait, yes it does.

WritersChoices said...

im not that short....

Alex McCurdy said...

oh yes you are tiny mexi man