Sunday, December 28, 2008

Sinking in the Ocean, I Sink in Emotion

Think amiss notions,
Drink from this potion.
Blink in slow motion,
Sink in the ocean.

Slowlyslowlyslowlylowlylowlylowlyowowow
ClosingclosingclosinglosinglosinglosingLOSLOSLOS
In.

S
i
n
k in emotion.

- Alexander McCurdy

3 comments:

Anonymous said...

i adore this
you're very good with imagery.

~hayley

Everything Intangible said...

this is a very interesting style for you. its strictly poetic in form but Ii imagine the sonic components if you read it to me aloud. Way to revive cliches - listen to that blue october song, the one bout swimming in the ocean. you did a concrete poetry version of that theme while playing with linguistics. very cool. if you didn't get the message: props

Connie, who blinked said...

i run slow.
i'l challenge you to a wikirace.