this is a very interesting style for you. its strictly poetic in form but Ii imagine the sonic components if you read it to me aloud. Way to revive cliches - listen to that blue october song, the one bout swimming in the ocean. you did a concrete poetry version of that theme while playing with linguistics. very cool. if you didn't get the message: props
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i adore this
you're very good with imagery.
~hayley
this is a very interesting style for you. its strictly poetic in form but Ii imagine the sonic components if you read it to me aloud. Way to revive cliches - listen to that blue october song, the one bout swimming in the ocean. you did a concrete poetry version of that theme while playing with linguistics. very cool. if you didn't get the message: props
i run slow.
i'l challenge you to a wikirace.
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